Writers for The Economist are masterful at producing information-packed little articles, and such an economic approach to word count is useful, but the Internet has given such publications an opportunity to provide depth without necessarily using much more space.
A recent issue of The Economist had a story about the world’s biggest lake. Lake Baikal, which happens to be in Siberia—Russia’s freezer—is “stuffed with endemic plants and animals.” And it’s “home to the world’s largest colony of freshwater seals.” On more than one occasion, the author refers to the natural beauty of the lake and its uniqueness, yet there isn’t a single photo of the lake, its species, or its surroundings.
SUGGESTION:
1. There should be a link to a photo slide show focusing on the lake’s history and uniqueness.
2. And/Or: There should be video: a slow, panoramic shot of the lake, also with insightful, contextual commentary.
The author of the article opens with a paraphrase from a six-fingered shaman. “What does this shaman look like?” was my first question when I read the article.
SUGGESTION:
3. There should be a photo of this man on the Web site. And, perhaps a few minutes of video (with subtitles) of him talking about the lake.
According to the article, a Russian environmental commission approved the building of an oil pipeline within spitting distance from the lake, but—you many want to sit down for this one—Russian President Vladimir Putin intervened to have the pipeline be at least 25 miles from the lake.
SUGGESTION: The author acknowledges that this move by Putin—“who had previously insinuated that environmentalists were foreign agents”—is a bit unusual.
4. There should, therefore, be a table with a brief outline of Putin’s decisions on the environment.
Also, the author doesn’t mention that Putin’s decision came around the 20th anniversary of the Chernobyl nuclear disaster, which is no small detail.
SUGGESTION:
5. This fact should be mentioned, and the word “Chernobyl” should be hyperlinked to Economist articles on the topic. This will not distract the reader but only provide historical context to those less familiar with the topic.
6. While I’m on the topic of links, the following words should have hyperlinks to Economist articles on the topic: Putin, Irkutsk, Lake Baikal, tourism (to the region), poverty and joblessness (in the region), oil pipeline, etc.
7. Most readers probably don’t know where the lake is, even if they know where Siberia is. There should be “view map of this region” and “view map of suggested oil pipeline” links at the margin.
Lastly, a downloadable audio transcript of the story should be available. This should be available from other great magazines, too, like The New Yorker, The Atlantic, and Harper’s. I prefer to read the printed word, but desperate times—like standing upright in a packed subway without an inch to spare—call for audio articles. And to make a few rubles, these companies can have a short, 10-second ad: “The following article is brought to you by…”